AND IT WAS …

Under the table lies a cork
and there,
in the corner;
carelessly kicked off shoes.

Wineglasses stand around
with tired sediment-smiles,
while the crumbled biscuits
are swept away.

As I think back on the
tales that we shared,
and the laughs that we had …

egad!
I just remembered;
I forgot to serve the bloody cake!

Β©Cindy Taylor 2008

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28 Comments Add yours

  1. deepercolors says:

    Nice images of after the party. πŸ™‚

  2. souldipper says:

    Wot?? No carb fanatics to remind you?

  3. gospelwriter says:

    forgot to serve the cake?? and nobody reminded you? – obviously I wasn’t there πŸ˜‰

  4. Adeeyoyo says:

    Cake? Methinks cheese and biscuits would have gone down better.

  5. kolembo says:

    Very funny! I have one that starts the same way but goes in a different direction after shoes in the corner! Thanks

  6. Sounds like your friend taking over your kitchen was a fabulous idea. Glad you enjoyed it!

  7. nursemyra says:

    Who needs cake when you’ve got wine?

  8. granny1947 says:

    Morning Cin…been there, done that!

  9. Breakfast!!!! Haha.
    xx

  10. Rita says:

    Absolutely fantastic!! Witty and funny! πŸ™‚

  11. Yvette says:

    I’d be happy just with the wine! xx

  12. thysleroux says:

    I forgot to serve the bloody cake! <– this is also an original sin!! oi!

  13. I’m with nursemyra: who needs cake?

  14. suzicate says:

    A good wine can stand alone, but cake makes everthing better!

  15. bandsmoke says:

    Keep the cake, cheese and biscuits please πŸ™‚

  16. halfp1nt says:

    Hehehe, who needs cake when there’s wine!

  17. slpmartin says:

    What’s so funny is that I’ve actually done that. πŸ™‚ So glad that I’m not the only one.

  18. Naomi says:

    LOL!! Brilliant imagery, Cin, in every way πŸ™‚

  19. Pseu says:

    Thank goodness I’m not the only one who forgets to serve something.

    I found red cabbage in the microwave after a party and I nearly always forget to sprinkle parsley although I love it….

    I like the sediment smiles

  20. buttercup600 says:

    Happened to me too my friend….mostly the wine would be enough anyway!! Loved it oxo

  21. Ha! What a refreshing, humorous poem!

  22. Renee Espriu says:

    I agree with another’s comments in that, yes, you sure can write and I love this piece and it is the first I’ve read. I will return to see more of what you have here. Nicely written.

  23. Jamie Dedes says:

    Chuckle! πŸ™‚ Nicely poemed. I’ve done that sort of thing myself w/o the excuse of spirits … I’ve been accused (wrongly?) of trying to hord the cake for myself.

  24. sonsothunder says:

    Okay…I’m ready for the cake now…

  25. Archana says:

    b’ful work!
    will read some more of your’s!! πŸ™‚

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